As mentioned previously, after I am finished re-writing my "first" novel Borrowed Flesh (I am completely going experimental Burroughs with it a la Naked Lunch) I am planning on penning a novelization based on Gene Roddenberry's first pilot episode of The Cage he did for his Star Trek series.
I had attempted for literally months to locate the rough treatment online I had once read in a book called The Making of Star Trek by Stephen Whitefield. I had finally found it. And for you nerds and curious, I have posted it in its entirety below.
My take on the story will stay close to the teleplay with additions that are mentioned in the treatment. I enjoyed the fact that the Talosians are completely alien looking - crab like creatures and not short humanoids with big brains - which made Vina's line in the show at the end more probable. "They'd never seen a human before. They had no guide in putting me back together." The story plot line differs sometime from the filmed teleplay, I like the unused "illusion segments" as well, which I will incorporate into the novel.
My take on the story will stay close to the teleplay with additions that are mentioned in the treatment. I enjoyed the fact that the Talosians are completely alien looking - crab like creatures and not short humanoids with big brains - which made Vina's line in the show at the end more probable. "They'd never seen a human before. They had no guide in putting me back together." The story plot line differs sometime from the filmed teleplay, I like the unused "illusion segments" as well, which I will incorporate into the novel.
I plan on writing the novel in a style as if the reader had never seen or heard of Star Trek before with full character descriptions based on Roddenberry's original ideas (i.e; Spock was supposed to be the first and only alien to serve aboard an Earth vessel), and fleshing out and updating technology. It will be lavishly detailed in description, the Kaylar will be the only major change, from a buck-toothed viking to a large, black furred, four armed gorilla in body armor who will actually talk (well...grunt and snarl in an alien language), other than that I am sticking to the script dialog with the slight updates of "Talos star group" to "Talos star system" and "We come from a planet on the other side of the galaxy" to "We come from a planet on the other side of this quadrant". As for technology aboard the Enterprise, no more dials and buttons, the Enterprise will feature high tech touch screen technology.
So, here it is, the treatment to The Cage. Enjoy.
“The Cage”
Story outline by
Gene Rodenberry
6-29-64
ACT ONE:
The U.S.S. Enterprise,
cruising towards its next port of call, intercepts an emergency astro-wave sent
out fourteen years previously from survivors of a space ship which had
disappeared years ago. The message states that the ship had run into
difficulty, attempted to set down on planet Sirius IV, crashed. The survivors
had since been using fading power, hoping their radios appeals would be
intercepted by a passing ship. We get a good look at the workings of the
Enterprise as Captain Robert April diverts it to Sirius IV.
The Enterprise orbits the
planet, the ship’s electroscopes locating the crashed ship and focusing a
picture on it onto the giant picture screen at the bridge. Radio contact is established,
and they hear a strange, atonal recitation voice of one of the survivors.
Navigator Jose Tyler is a bit suspicious of some of the message, plus the fact
that the fading ship’s power had lasted so long. But everything else seems to
make sense. Robert April selects a recon party of himself, Mister Spock, Jose,
and the ship’s doctor Phillip Boyce, and they step into the transporter
chamber. We get our first look at this procedure, too, as it beams them to
materialize on the planet’s surface below.
The landing party is beamed
to materialize on arid, rocky Sirius IV a quarter mile from the wrecked ship.
They move carefully, maintaining defense security, come upon a small encampment
containing the few, half-starved survivors who are almost unable to believe a
rescue party is finally here. One of these is a young woman, Vina,
provocatively lovely, showing so few effects of the ordeal that Dr. Boyce
becomes suspicious, and he finds other things that don’t make sense to his
medical mind.
At an appropriate moment,
we pull back and realize all this is being watched on a strange-shaped
televisor screen by crab-like creatures. Although in no human way, they are
obviously intelligent and have digital capabilities via six multiclawed arms
and legs. The screen goes close up on several of the Enterprise recon party
members, finally centers and stays on Captain April. The crab-creature at the
televisor controls turns from the screen, using claw snap and chatter for
speech, and the other two creatures respond to it and depart.
At the survivor camp,
routine recon party security has been abandoned in the excitement of finding
survivors. Dr. Boyce reaches April with his warning. April is diverted by the
girl Vina who seems to understand those doubts and wants to tell him something
important. She moves with him to an odd shaped geological formation and,
standing directly in front of him, she suddenly disappears! The entire survivor
group and encampment have disappeared in the same moment, and the recon party
from the Enterprise stands totally alone, stunned, separated from each other,
and momentarily defenseless. And in the same instant the two crab creatures
suddenly emerge from a trap door in the rock formation immediately behind
Captain April, expertly enmeshing him in a plastic bag of extraordinary
strength, drag the struggling Enterprise captain into a metal lined underground
passage as his struggles grow feebler and he falls unconscious. Mister Spock
and navigator Tyler race there, laser guns out and blasting away at the rock,
earth, and strange vegetation which camouflage the entry, succeeding in only
exposing a gray metal cap which their laser beams will not penetrate or even
mark.
Captain Robert April
awakes, rolls to his feet, checking to find his weapons have been taken. He
still has his small telecommunicator which has slipped down inside his shirt
during the struggle. He starts to pull it out, freezes as he becomes aware his
“cell” is enclosed on the forth side by a fully transparent panel and
crab-creatures stand outside watching him. He palms the telecommunicator, moves
to the transparent wall. Outside, his captivity is creating considerable
interest among the creatures; we can hear the snapping and clattering of their
claws and external armor-skeleton. April stealthily tunes his telecommunicator
until the clattering noises blend into an atonal translation.
The reciting voice makes it
clear that April is in a “zoo”, his cage is only one of many that line the
corridor outside. The “Keeper” is lecturing the others on his estimation of
this sample of protein-life they have captured. The others out on the planet’s
surface cannot interfere, since their power and weaponry is of a primitive
laser-beam type. This particular one in the enclosure seemed the healthiest and
most alert of the lot, the best choice for the “experiment”.
ACT TWO:
We are outside April’s
enclosure, the crab-creatures continue to discuss their specimen. As with the
similar creatures who died in the spaceship crash years ago on their planet,
the intellectual process seemed as primitive as their weaponry. It was quite
simple to bait them in with messages and images of surviving fellow creatures.
Apparently they have little ability to distinguish imagery from reality. And if
the observers will tune in on this biped protein-creature’s mind, the Keeper
will demonstrate.
Inside the enclosure, April
has begun the attempt at communication with the crab-creatures. Absolutely
ignored, he tries to rap on the transparent wall. Still failing to get their
attention, he finds a water container on the floor, moves to strike it against
the transparent wall. In mid-motion the water container becomes an odd-shaped
short sword, he is wearing beryllium armor, using a shield to protect himself
from similarly armed hairy manlike creatures who are attacking him, trying to
get to the woman he protects. Exotically dressed, this is the illusion-woman
Vina who he previously met at the “survivors” encampment. April is stunned to
find himself in this position but cannot shake of the reality of it when a
sword cut draws blood on his left upper-arm and he is forced to fight back in
defense. A blow from one of the hairy bipeds sends him spinning, and his
telecommunicator falls out of his shirt onto the ground. Protecting himself with
his shield, he scrambles to regain it.
We are back with the
crab-creatures, watching April inside the enclosure, in the same position
scrambling on the floor for the telecommunicator he had dropped. The water
container is still in his hand, his other arm raised as if holding a shield,
protecting himself from the enemies he is fighting in the illusion. Scrambling
back to his feet, he continues the swordplay, shouting back at the nonexistent
girl to get away while she can.
The Keeper, via the atonal
voice, is explaining that this is the planet Endrex II on which the subject
once landed and was involved in a similar incident. A female has been inserted
into this illusion to demonstrate how deeply these bipeds are moved by danger
to their females.
One of the crab-creatures
inquires about the small telecommunicator in April’s hand, and the Keeper
correctly identifies it as a simple language translator device. There’re
letting the subject retain it in the event that they wish to communicate with
him.
Inside the enclosure, the
illusion is suddenly over and Bob April finds himself back in his cage,
wielding the water container like a sword, disheveled and perspiring. All the
crab-creatures are departing except for the Keeper, who moves to a sort of desk
at the end of the corridor of enclosures containing various life specimens from
other parts of the universe. (Theses enclosures are staggered so we see little
of the others from April’s location.)
In addition to the water
container, April’s cage contains a sponge-like epiloid that can serve as a bed,
covered with a filmy metallic blanket; a decorative pool of surging water that
has something of a splashing fountain in the center – the enclosure spotlessly
clean and bare, utilitarian but not unattractive. There are no visible exits or
ingresses, no crannies, no holes – April is hopelessly trapped.
A voice – April whirling to
find the girl Vina, now in a metallic dress approximating the filmy blanket, in
the cage with him, watching him. An unusual conversation – April, defiant and
angry, is not interested in wasting time on illusions which come and go like
snapping a light switch on and off. Vina laughingly agrees she has no real
substance, that she is a product of his mind, and as such she is naturally
attracted to him. Isn’t that the male dream image of a woman, one who cannot
resist? And Vina does seem almost compulsively attracted to April, strangely
playing the seductress. He tries to ignore her, works with his telecommunicator
to produce a maximum radio signal. Vina tells him that they are far underground
with a half-mile of solid balsite rock insulating them from the planet’s
surface. There is no way a radio signal to penetrate this and give the
spaceship a bearing on him. Vina also seems to be fully aware of all the
spaceship’s capabilities and systems, the limitations of its power, the use of
the matter-energy scrambler by which men and material can be transported from
the ship to the planet’s surface, April’s status as commander, and so on. Being
made up as she is from April’s thoughts and memories, she knows this and much
more. Even secretes about himself he’s never admitted to another human being,
terrestrial or otherwise. Then, seemingly annoyed by the fact that he won’t
answer, she disappears as abruptly as she arrived.
On the U.S.S. Enterprise,
the recon party has returned and reported Captain April’s capture to “Number
One”. The resources of the Enterprise are being organized for a location and
rescue. In this, utilizing conflicts of viewpoint and attitude, we continue to
explore the series’ regular characters. Phillip Boyce, M.D., has made the most
accurate analysis of the life below. Mister Spock has fairly close estimations
on the science of the civilization, plus observations of the planet composition
and structure. Youthful navigator Joe (Jose) Tyler is irritated at the caution
of the others, insists on an attack in force, is already utilizing his
brilliance in determining in how some combination of the ship’s power might
penetrate the planet’s surface to locate underground passages, even permit
radio waves to operate through what appears to be solid rock so that some sort
of communication can be established.
Lovely J. M. Colt, the captain’s yeoman, is enough concerned with
April’s safety that she slips in her duties and draws a rebuke from a seemingly
emotionless “Number One”.
The commander of the U.S.S
Enterprise is asleep on his odd-shaped bed in his cage. Outside, the Keeper has
been joined by another crab-creature, and they hover over a screen watching the
sleeping man. Back to Robert April, then the surface of the bed begins to
shimmer and change, the covering over his body going from metallic cloth to
brocade satin. Then a slim hand reaches in and shakes him. April awakes, finds
the lovely illusion Vina with him again. He is lying in a richly appointed bed
in a luxurious room. She wears a robe that can only be from the Renaissance
period, addressing him as “M’Lord” as she tells him that she has arrived in
answer to his request. Despite what April says, she continues as if some
romantic tryst had been arranged between them. April tries reason, finally
becoming annoyed that he raises his voice, and a pike bearing man-at-arms
enters from the double doors, thinking that his “master” has called out in alarm,
apologizes quickly upon seeing Vina, exits again. April angrily goes to the
window, looks out, and finds the scene of Renaissance Venice, his building a
palace at the edge of the old city’s central piazza.
The lovely Vina persists in
playing it as a lovers rendezvous until it becomes obvious April has no
intentions in succumbing. Then, amused, she drops her Renaissance seductress
and tries to accomplish the same through a logical analysis of his situation.
Why not relax and go along with the illusion? It’s pleasant, isn’t it?
Everything looks real, feels real; the pleasure can be equally real. And he
can’t deny this is out of his own daydreams. And it’s a fine one. The more
intelligent he man, the more colorful and more pleasant the variety of dreams.
Imagination is superior to real life; there is no flesh and blood to be hurt;
he can even relax and delight in those secret evil things that lurk in the back
of every man’s mind.
April, on the other hand,
can guess that all of this is being watched by the alien life that imprisons
him, and he damned well will not perform for their amusement and edification.
And he is beginning to have some doubts about Vina, is she completely a figment
of his imagination? April baits her into talking about the crab-creatures, their
civilization and their planet. Seeming to please him in all ways, she explains
that the intelligent crablike race had once lived on the planet’s surface but
that recurring wars, overpopulation, and exhaustion of the planet’s mineral and
vegetable resources had eons ago forced the planet’s scientists to band
together and begin burrowing into deep underground communities to protect
themselves from the certain destruction of the civilization of the planet
above. The creatures who have captured April are the decedents of this
scientific society. The surface civilization died long ago, leaving the surface
of Sirius IV the arid waste found by the Enterprise recon party. The
crab-creatures are advanced far beyond man’s capabilities, gave up space travel
long ago as vastly less efficient and pleasant than utilizing the power of pure
thought.
April questions this
sharply, and Vina admits this has been discovered as a mistake that has seen
the crab-creatures lose their vigor and old disciplines; they are incapable now
of repairing their wondrous cities and machines. They sit at their televisors,
living and reliving experiences and emotions left in the thought records left
behind by their forebears. Even the “zoo” is part of this – the cage holding
descendants of creatures brought back hundreds of centuries ago from other
planets, living exotic experiences and emotions from specimens, too.
Thought-imagery has, in fact, become a vicious drug by which the crab-creatures
have become incapable of experience and emotion of their own. They have become
so totally dependent on the minds of others that it will ultimately destroy the
surviving crab-creatures as effectively as war and pestilence destroyed their
ancestors on the surface.
Captain Robert April finds
himself sitting in the exact same position as an instant ago but now on the bed
in his cell; Vina also sitting beside him in the same position but now back in
the metallic cloth dress. She is in mid-sentence, adding, “Unless the
acquisition of an animal like you allows them to..." She trails her words
as she, too, realizes the Renaissance illusion is over, stops frightened. April
is not willing to let her stop there. For one thing, she can’t be totally a
creature of his mind. He has never seen her before, never even imagined her.
Why does she keep reappearing? And how can a figment of his mind tell him
things he does not know? His mind contains no information on the inhabitants of
this planet. Is she one of the crab-creatures in the thought-guise of an earth
woman? Her expression changes, as if by a sudden decision, and she quickly
says, “I am real, as real as you are. We’re…well, like Adam and Eve. If they
can…” Vina vanishes in mid-sentence as if she had suddenly been taken away
before she could complete the statement.
FADE OUT.
ACT THREE:
On the surface of planet
Sirius IV, a recon party under the direction of “Number One” has brought one of
the vessel’s huge matter-converters to the surface of the planet, is focusing
it on the sealed tunnel entrance at the outcropping of rock where April was
captured. Using enormous force, risking dangerous depletion of the Enterprise’s energy, they attempt to cut
through the stubborn metal. It glows red, then white-hot, but stubbornly
resists even the maximum force of the converter. “Number One” calls the ship
where navigator Jose is in deep computation on ways to look into the planets rock
crust. He has gone down one blind alley after another without result. He now
wants to orbit and probe with electromagnetic waves. If the intelligence below
is using any form of radio, this would distort their magnetic field, give them
some estimation of the location and extent of the civilization below.
April is being fed. The
Keeper is able to pass material objects through the transparent wall which
April himself cannot penetrate. It is a small vial of heavy, dark liquid. To
encourage April to eat, the Keeper finally communicates – the atonal voice
explaining that April’s chemical processes have been analyzed as completely as
his thought processes and that the vial contains a protein-carbohydrate mixture
more than adequate for nourishment and health. If April wishes, it will be
quite simple to create the illusion that the vial is a banquet spread with
whatever food April cares to draw from his memory. April rejects this and
challenges the Keeper. Why should he not let himself die of starvation rather
to continue as a captive? The Keeper unemotionally recites that this impossible
since they are perfectly capable of creating for him the illusions of hunger so
continuing and powerful that he would be unable to resist. Or there is the
unpleasant alternative of punishment…
April is instantly writhing
in brimstone, a sulfurous, smoky hellfire place where flame licks at him from
all sides and screams of pain are wretched from him. It only lasts a few
seconds and he is back facing the Keeper through the transparent wall. This is
a sample from a childhood tale April once read and remembers. There are even
more unpleasant things in April’s mind. Does he care for another sample of
punishment?
April bargains with the
Keeper. What is the identity of the image Vina? He’ll take his food if the
Keeper answers that question. The Keeper hesitates, then, as unemotionally as
always, recites that April has already guessed the truth. There was a single
survivor from the Earth ship crash on the planet surface, a female. They found
this specimen interesting, particularly the fact that it responded well to the
planet’s conditions. They repaired her injuries and have kept her, waiting for
another Earth ship to pass through the galaxy. The U.S.S. Enterprise was baited here by the false radio message so that they
could have a male specimen of the same species. Life for April and Vina will be
made extremely pleasant, indeed much more pleasant than could ever be possible
for him or the woman in any other galaxy or on any other planet in the
Universe. April starts to set the vial down, the Keeper continuing, “For
example…”
April, in the exact same
posture and motion, setting down a china coffee cup onto a saucer. He and Vina
are in a penthouse overlooking an Earth city, circa 2049 A.D. The young woman,
acting as his wife, is moving to refill his cup and is stating that their
friend Varjos Miller has four tickets on the Tahiti jet. It might be fun for
the weekend. It’s less than thirty minutes away, and the Federated Park
Commission is doing a festival of the old islands outrigger races, fishing,
village ceremonies, and so on. During this, Vina’s voice fades under and the
Keeper’s unemotional recitation voice is heard explaining that April can live
on Earth in his own time, enjoying all its pleasures. Or…
April finds himself in an
almost fairy book vine-covered cottage on one of the rural can-farms of Mars,
still with Vina, in different garb and background. She is continuing her
sentence, saying that the Colonial Grange Society is also planning Barth races
and that there will be a fifty mile sled ride down the Great Slopes that
evening. Does he remember how they first met on one of these Martian “hay rides”?
During which Vina’s voice again has faded under, and the Keeper’s voice recites
that April can also live in simpler ways…or he can live in wild excitement…in
any one and every one of ten thousand places he has visited or even imagined…
April finds himself on
Protos VI, cushioned in barbaric splendor in one of the planet’s eerie rainbow
gardens, facing a magnificent feast across which Vina and sinuous green dancing
girls of that world dance for him, the long-eared courtiers subserviently
bowing and scraping. Vina, whirling in the barefoot dance, makes a misstep,
falls, and a giant Protos slave is on her with a whip, viciously lashing, and a
courtier is in quickly bowing and apologizing, promising the girl will be
destroyed immediately. April, despite his knowledge that this is only imagery,
is forced to his feet, appalled, shouting for the slave to stop beating the
girl.
And at that same instant he
finds himself back on his feet in his cage, biting off his words. The
crab-creature Keeper is watching him through the transparent wall. A voice at
his elbow says that she is pleased that he does seem to care for her, and April
whirls to find Vina standing next to him. The Keeper scuttles off back to his “desk”.
Vina waits long enough only
for the Keeper to leave, and she reveals that she is holding a space-boat axe
out of sight behind her body. She took it from the wreckage, and been hiding it
since. The corridor outside is empty, and if he could use the axe to break the transparent
wall, they can escape. The crab-creatures are relatively slow and weak, and
they long since stopped carrying weapons. April swings hard at the transparent
wall. It gives slightly, he swings harder, the Keeper outside scuttling towards
an alarm signal as April finally crashes through with the girl behind him. She
screams at him to stop the creature before it can reach the mechanism. April
leaps across the corridor, swinging the axe, and destroys the machine. The
crab-creature attacks him, and April defends himself, dispatching the Keeper.
He and Vina turn to flee down the corridor.
No alarm has been sounded,
the “zoo” corridor is empty, and despite Vina’s frantic urging to leave immediately,
April cannot resist looking into the glass front enclosures that line the corridor.
The first is a shocker – a huge six-legged spider-anthropoid with saber toothed
fangs throws itself directly at him, stopped only by the transparent wall.
Snarling and screaming in fury, the creature flings itself again and again at
April, trying to get at him through the barrier. Vina identifies this as the
spider-ape of a Rigel planet group.
At the next, a writhing
mass of intertwined, hissing, snakelike bodies with vague humanoid faces and
atrophied arms. Another enclosure contains incredibly delicate and elongated
winged “angel” creatures, perched on ledges of what appears to be a “zoo”
mock-up of a wispy, sky-spire city. And another, mongoose-like rodents, but
clothed and weaponed like a feudal civilization, complete with a tiny castle,
moat, ramparts, etc. It’s night, oil lamps can be seen burning in the tiny,
toy-sized windows. The last civilization April himself has seen before – the intelligent
Lemur-life of a Class M planet in the Arcturus system.
At the end of the corridor
is a low hatchway door shaped to fit the crab-creature shape. April forces it
open, and the two flee down a long tube-like metallic corridor – directly into
a group of angry crab-creatures blocking their way.
Back on the U.S.S. Enterprise, navigator Jose has continued
probing the planet electromagnetically, finally picks up interference at one
point. Probing more deeply, he finds that his instruments are able to analyze
it as a feeble signal up through the rock from April’s telecommunicator.
Computing rapidly, Jose gets a fix on depth and angle. Sending a recon party
will be highly risky – if the vector is a fraction of a degree off, the rescue
party can find themselves materialized inside solid rock instead of a cavern or
passageway. “Number One” insists on leading the rescue party; Jose demands that
he be a member and take the risk of his own computations, Yeoman Colt also
volunteers, and Mister Spock is selected as the fourth member. They arm
themselves and prepare to be transported down. One of the spaceships
technicians is frowning over his instruments, whirls and tries to warn them he
is getting some kind of “feedback”. But it is too late. The transporter has
been energized, and “Number One” and Colt are dematerializing already. But Jose
and Spock remain where they are – for some
reason only the women are being transported!
“Number One” and Yeoman
Colt arrive inside April’s “zoo cage” sans
weapons. And find themselves watching the strange spectacle of Captain April
holding the hand of the young woman Vina, both their eyes glazed like
sleepwalkers, legs moving as if trying to escape something in a dream. Then
April and Vina stop, come back to reality, realizing where they are. The
Keeper, alive and unharmed, stands outside the glass wall watching them. The
escape has been merely another illusion.
The Keeper is amused. There
is no need for additional male specimens so their transportation was blocked
off. But the arrival of two additional females is quite welcome. Obviously the
specimen named April does not care for the first female, and so he has now two
alternate choices.
FADE OUT.
ACT FOUR:
Aboard the Enterprise, all controls on the
transporter has gone dead. Their scanners, communicators, all contact with the
planet has been lost. Jose can hardly believe the only answer his computations
can offer – that the civilization below has devices capable of using pure
thought to warp time and dimension to their needs. The Enterprise has no way to counter this. Attack on the planet would
be foolhardy as an ant attacking an elephant.
In April’s “cage” Vina
fills April, “Number One”, and Colt in on why they are there. At first, during
her five years of captivity, she believed the crab-creatures desperate attempt
to attract a male Earth man to the planet was merely so the Earth specimens
could have offspring and not die out, adding some new and different Earth
illusions to the menagerie. But she has grown to realize there is a deeper need
behind all this. The crab-creatures are dying out. Their ability to live other
lives, painlessly and effortlessly, completely without danger to themselves,
has drained their vitality and courage. Even their creativity. The great
science civilization has stagnated; the machinery left behind by their
ancestors is falling into disrepair; none of them care to repair it or know
even how it works. Their once proud capacity for adventure, risk, travel, and
all the things that make growth and life possible, has atrophied away.
The Keeper, watching them
through the transparent wall, now interrupts, pleased with their capacity for
logic. This, with their high degree of adaptability, makes them ideally suited
to the formation of communities on the surface of the planet, a parasite
civilization which will exist to serve as farmers, technicians, and even
scientists. The crab-creatures who control their minds will mete out illusions
of pleasure and pain as it becomes necessary to evolve them and their descendants
into a life of unselfish service. Robert April interrupts, pointing out a flaw
in all this. The human creature is incapable of surviving in imprisonment. The
Keeper disagrees, points out the first and most powerful impulse of life is for
survival. Although they will have no freedom of choice, those who adapt will
have wish-fulfillment rewards more pleasant than anywhere else possibly in the
Universe. Meanwhile, the male specimen April can have any one of the females,
or all of them. The choice is his…now.
At that moment, again in
mid-word and mid-motion, April and the three women find themselves upon the
planet’s surface. The Keeper’s voice can be heard continuing. They will immediately
begin guided lives of labor, pleasure, and punishment. Wrong-thinking is
prohibited, and the training of their children will be strictly controlled. The
crab-creatures will patiently wait the generations necessary for them to build
their parasite civilization of trained, right-thinking servants. For the use of
themselves and their descendants, the zoological gardens will furnish a variety
of plant life and certain animals that will be domesticated. If they will look
at their belts, they will find their Laser weapons have been returned so that
shelter and tools can be fashioned. Plus their telecommunicator instruments
which will provide translation until the science language of the planet can be
learned by them. They are completely controlled; there is no possible escape.
Any thought of contact with their vessel…interrupted by “Number One” who has
taken out her telecommunicator, but falls to the ground writhing and crying out
in pain. The Keeper continues that, as they can see, wrong-thinking is not only
useless but will also be severely punished. Yeoman Colt, showing an unsuspected
streak of courage, starts to say, “I will not…”, also begins suffering an
illusion of intense suffering.
It is later, a violet-sky
evening, April and the women sitting, waiting, wondering. Suddenly “Number One”
realizes she has been thinking of the ship and rescue and had not been
punished. April nods, has realized the same. For a moment at least they are
free to do and think as they wish. He slowly draws his Laser gun, adjust the
setting on it. Vina looks at him, frightened, begins to plead. She has been
here so many years; the Keeper was right when he promised that there could be
pleasure that exceeds imagination. She has cooperated and discovered this.
April has seen only the smallest sample of possibility. “Number One”
interrupts, insisting to April, “Now! Before they stop us!” Yeoman Colt,
although frightened, also nods at April. Vina throws herself at him, trying to
stop him, frantically screaming that the crab-creatures are actually kind and
gentle; they can give unimaginable pleasure if you cooperate with them…April
interrupts, saying he has no right to force their decision onto her. For them,
they prefer death. He has set the gun for hypo-pellet; death is instant,
painless…
April raises the gun, aims
carefully at “Number One” then finds himself unable to move. A clatter of
external skeleton is heard, then April is finally released to turn and find the
Keeper and a group of other crab-creatures there, facing him. Strangely, there
is something of a sadness in the Keeper’s atonal, reciting voice. They have
been probing deeply in his and the other women’s memories, tracing the violent
history of their race. April was right; although Man’s history is savage in the
extreme, it has almost always been a fight against some sort of captivity, even
if death was the price of escape. Intelligent life here on Sirius IV has the
same history, but it was assumed unique to this planet.
There is another parallel between
them and Earth life. To kill is considered wrong. Their laws do not permit them
to be responsible for the death of another creature…even if it means the death
of their own civilization. They will seek another solution. If it is the will
of the Creator of the Universe that they live, a solution will be found in
time. They’re all now free to transport to the space vehicle. An angle on Vina…as
she protests. April can’t possibly understand, but she has been here too long,
enjoyed the dreams too long. She does not want to go back. And as she talks, we
see the slow aging from a lovely, youthful woman to an almost grotesque
middle-aged woman, bearing the scars and burn marks of a spaceship crash.
Trying to hide her face from April, she frantically pleads to the
crab-creatures to keep her here. She is not like the others – she wants captivity. She doesn’t want
reality, she wants dreams…please!
The Keeper asks April his
wish. Do they desire to take the survivor specimen with them? Then, before
April can answer, the crab-creature Keeper intones that he’s read April’s
answer and understands.
Aboard the U.S.S. Enterprise, Mister Spock is working at
the transporter’s dead controls, then reacts as the machine hums back to life.
Images begin to form in the materialization chamber, and April, “Number One”,
and J. M. Colt appear, and step out into the room, alive and unharmed. What
they say to each other about hoping this escape is not another illusion doesn’t
make much sense to the rest of the crew.
Yeoman Colt, always much
the female, wonders which one April ultimately would had picked. April,
half-amused at Colt, admits the dream-like Vina was much more eager and
cooperative than either the Yeoman or “Number One”. This gets him a sharp look
from the otherwise unperturbed Executive Officer, who excuses herself, moving
off to take her position up on the bridge. J. M. Colt would probably exhibit
more jealousy, too, except for the rank between herself and her captain.
Navigator Jose Tyler, always the Latin, is instantly interested, wondering whether
or not this “illusion” was beautiful? April nods, stating there is nothing more
beautiful than an illusion. Or dangerous. As the civilization on Sirius IV had
discovered. When they are under way, he’ll work with Dr. Boyce and the science
lab technicians on a report for Earth on the narcotic danger of illusion. By
the time man develops the full power of his mind, he’d better be aware of that
fact.
“Number One” and the crew
on the bridge are standing by for orders. Captain Robert April gives the
command that will head the Enterprise back on its former course, leaving Sirius
IV behind in the distance. A shot of a space vehicle picking up speed into
hyperdrive and…
FADE OUT
2 comments:
Wait who is Captain April.... Wasn't it Christopher Pike? I loved this post. Of course I eat up anything to do with Trek.
The name "Pike" wasn't tagged on until they actually began shooting. The Captain began as Robert April, then Winter, Spring, and eventually Pike.
What was posted above was a very early synopsis of the planned episode. So, the Captain was still "April".
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